Short Story: Man Standing in the Dark (Part Two)



Part Two


He had bought a mini-whiteboard and was drawing something. I went near the whiteboard and took a close look at it. It had random names scribbled on it and some sentences like – “Met in a Fair” and “Rich Man with Unsatisfying Relationship”. I was perplexed. I didn’t know what it meant. My father looked at me and smiled. I thought of asking him, but did not. I was aware of his habit of acting suspicious. I knew he wouldn’t say, so I did not question him and departed from our drawing room. Rest of the day I kept thinking of what I saw in the drawing room. This unexpected change in my father’s behavior left me baffled, searching for an answer that only he had. After a few hours, my parents went out to do essential shopping and I had a chance to know what was actually going on in my father’s mind.
            I looked at the mini-whiteboard and saw it was filled with almost 10 or more sentences. It had no title or subtitle to it on the top. I started reading:


  1. It starts with an unplanned meeting of three people.
  2. The protagonist (of the story) has difficulty in breathing during the trek and other two helps him.
  3. Three of them are unaware that a number of problems are waiting ahead for them.
  4. One night, something unexpected happens (fire in tent) and they all get separated.
  5. The place they’re in is not safe, they face a challenge each.
  6. Soon they find out – it is not an ordinary trip, but a trap!
  7. One of those three are behind this whole trap.

(PLOT IS COPYRIGHTED)

“WTF!” I exclaimed and sat with the white board in my hand. I read all the sentences again. It looked like a rough outline of a story. The sentences made considerable amount of sense to me; they were in a sequence, in order to develop a story out of it. Stories were not new to me, but I did not expect my father to plan anything related to any story. I went inside my room, deciding that I’ll ask my father about the sentences he had written on the whiteboard. And I secretly hoped he would disclose what’s going on in his mind. 
            My parents returned late at night around 11 .P.M. I knew my father would come in my room and pick up a book to read. I was working on my laptop when he came in my room. As I predicted, he picked up a book and started reading. I remained quiet, waiting for my mother to go to her room and sleep. Once she went inside her room, I went out and came with the whiteboard. My father saw me bringing it, was going to speak something, but stopped himself.
            “Papa, may I ask you something?”
            “Yes?”
            “What is all this?”
            “This is the plot of the book I am planning to write.”
            My guess was correctly. “From when did you develop interest in writing?”
            He smiled and asked me to pull a chair and sit with him.

TO BE CONTINUED . . .  

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